Crimson Twilight

This is really good. I've never read an essay on here before, because it's just not my idea of fun. I accidentally stumbled on this one from the main menu, ...

Hey, Writergirl. Great job on getting things started so fast. I love how you quickly laid out the fact that there will be action and romance. It makes it easy ...

Hey Scribe. I kind of think that this chapter is a bit confusing. I just didn't recognize some of the names, I guesse. I don't know what it was about ...

Hey Scribe, Great job on the third Chapter. I was excited to see that the plot was finally said in black and white. I read this Chapter, and I really ...

Hey, Great Second Chapter. I loved the fight scene. Usually I find fight scenes a little bit confusing, because it seems like the writer just gets too excitted and wrapped ...

Hey, I like this idea. It really works. I think that if you were to change a few things though, it could read more smoothly. For enstance, when you wrote: ...

Hey! I had no idea that you could write Poetry. I was honestly impressed. A few minor things I noticed were that when you wrote: "it would tale a whale ...

Hey, this is really good. I've never read a story on someone that is in an institution, so I admire you for your original idea. I'm excitted to see where ...

Hey, this is Crimson Twilight here, and I wanted to tell you that I am so impressed with the way that you have stayed with this story for so long. ...

Hey. This was good, and it held my attention the whole time. I was confused when you went from Johnathon to Kyle. I wasn't sure which one was getting married ...